Good representation of the sound of a sliding door. I could hear it in my mind. Guessing Georgia doesn’t have whiskey in her tea. None of the characters seem like much of drinkers/users. I wouldn’t be surprised if Jen drank alone though, or had a dope habit. I could maybe see Ean dabbling with green. And no telling about Siggi’s background, sounded like to me he’s from a Caribbean island, don’t think it was specified. And I wouldn’t swear to who got the cider at that beach party, would have to go back and look. I don’t have days when I don’t wish I had something to help, beyond the coffee and nicotine. And I don’t think drugs are the answer anymore. Just a hard road, wish I felt better for dealing with life is all. Working on it.
Good representation of the sound of a sliding door. I could hear it in my mind. Guessing Georgia doesn’t have whiskey in her tea. None of the characters seem like much of drinkers/users. I wouldn’t be surprised if Jen drank alone though, or had a dope habit. I could maybe see Ean dabbling with green. And no telling about Siggi’s background, sounded like to me he’s from a Caribbean island, don’t think it was specified. And I wouldn’t swear to who got the cider at that beach party, would have to go back and look. I don’t have days when I don’t wish I had something to help, beyond the coffee and nicotine. And I don’t think drugs are the answer anymore. Just a hard road, wish I felt better for dealing with life is all. Working on it.