Fine Sometimes Rain Chapter 03 P06
Dec15
Final new character introduction for this chapter! Probably not the best of introductions lol. Anyway gonna be traveling back home today (Monday) so I’ll be out of reach until the evening. I plan to schedule this page to go up at midnight on Monday, if it doesn’t and I my internet access goes out I may have to wait to post the page after 6pm. So let’s hope for the best.
Really nice backgrounds again! I think that the characters do not stand off of the background very well though, because of line weight. The outlines on the characters look even thinner in places than on the background; but because they are in the foreground, their outlines should be a little thicker. The lines on the umbrella are generally thicker than the background, so it works OK, though I think they could stand more weight as well. Hope that all makes sense. 🙂
Yes it makes sense. 🙂 Right now I’m going through a bit of trial and error when exporting my backgrounds from sketchup. Hopefully I can find a happy medium soon….it would probably help if I wrote down my different experiments because I fear I may be repeating some failures. OTL
Sketchup!! I wondered if you were using a program like that. Cool 😀
Yeah I’m addicted to building models, lol. It reminds me of playing Sims 2, but without the sims and better building tools. 😉
I think your art looks really professional. With Lauren’s advice it will become even better. ^^
Thanks! I will keep working hard. 🙂