Fine Sometimes Rain Chapter 01 – P05
May05
Still working hard to try to give you a few extra updates, hopefully I can accomplish it this month. I’d like to have 5 more pages in the archive before I go all out promoting it, but still my visits are a bit disappointing. If you like this comic so far, please share it with your friends. (˘ʃƪ˘)
Love the comic so far! There might be a typo in this page. It’s currently “eat a these pastry” in the comic. I think it should either be “eat these pastries” or “eat a pastry” depending on the quantity? Thanks for all you do.
Thanks for the heads up on the typo…I think my train of thought at the time was that Rita only brought one type of pastry, and normally I think of pastries plural referring to multiple types of baked sweets. Maybe I should just change it to croissant.
You’ve got a bit of a typo in the last panel, either “a pastey” or “these pastries”
I love your comics and would share them if I could 😀 I don’t know anyone else who reads them though 🙁
Will this be a longer story or of similar length to the last two?
Oh poop, I can’t believe I didn’t catch that typo. I’ll have to try to fix it tonight. Also yes, this will be longer than the last two. I have a complete rough outline written, but I’m not sure exactly how many chapters yet since I don’t block out chapters very far ahead.
And then I go and make a typo myself. “a pastry” not pastey. Also I don’t know anyone else who reads webcomics at all, not just yours.
What a gloomy goose :/ *pats her head*