Fine Sometimes Rain Chapter 04 – P14
May06
A noisy page today, lol. OK, so this is the last announcement I’ll make about the Food Porn KS. We are in the final hours and we’ve hit our first stretch goal and are about halfway to the second stretch goal which would mean a larger bonus for the artists and also Jennie Breeden would be adding a special story to the book. So, it’s your last chance to back the project and get yourself a really cool book!
Born to be Wild!!!!
Expeditious retreat!
Not QUITE what I was hoping Jun would do here… but functional!
Yay second helmet. 8D
I forgot to mention this is my post because I was still all keyed up about the KS, lol, but I thought I would mention this here now that the scene is done. I felt it really important for Georgia to make the choice to leave, and not be flat out “rescued” by Jun. It was written this way from the beginning, and the only changes that were made was how Jun delivered the helmet to Georgia, lol.
That’s what I took away from reading this. His wink definitely says “Your choice” to me. Makes her a co-conspirator on the escape instead of a helpless rescue.
Yeah it’s nice to see Georgia make the choice herself.
I love how she was so caught up ranting and raving she missed some guy randomly leaving a helmet a few few away from them.
Definitely, Amy, that’s a great way to empower Georgia. Excited to see where she takes it!